After presenting my pitch there was a mix of feedback which was actually very helpful.
People liked the fact that I was ending my speech on something different than 'I have a dream'.  I have ended it on The ''Free at last'' quote.  I did this because this leads on from the most powerful part of the speech in my opinion.

Another positive is that the class liked the fact that I'm not going to use music as everyone else is.  However this has changed and I have said why In earlier blogs but mainly because of the atmosphere this creates.

After telling them in my pitch about the coin, they said to use an American one however I couldn't get my hands on one which is a shame.

I was going to use kinetic type but with all my other footage it just didn't fit in with what I wanted to achieve.  Instead I used original footage of the speech to create the same effect of emphasising the spoken words instead of text on screen.

One last thing people mentioned is the clock.  Maybe it was in my video too much.  I disagree and I have accomplished what I wanted with it ticking away in every clip which I speeded up.