Pitch Review

On Monday the 14th November Our pitch was due to present to the class.

Feedback:

The overall feedback from my pitch was positive and people seemed to like the effect of simplicity I plan to use.  My animation is going to be stencil style.  This also adds to my simplicity rule to my animation.  People thought that my animatic was encouraging and positive without lecturing too much.

The improvements people suggested were to have a slogan or general message at the end that makes more of an impact such as 'Save our Planet'.  They also said that an instrumental of my song choice which is New Soul by Yael Naim was also benefit.

I am very happy with my feedback as everyone seemed to like the idea of planes, cars and buses circling the planet.  This is my main theme.