After doing Crit I received some positive and negative feedback.

My positive feedback was people seemed to find I had a strong visual language which is good because I aimed for this so it can be recognisable.  Also people liked the fact that different types of transport were revolving around the earth showing how Co2 affects out atmosphere and what we can do to change it by using bikes and walking etc.  This is a good point as the brief says it should not be too lecturing but give the message that we need to stop now.

Improvement comments that I received were that my Co2 fog should be placed behind the earth.  I haven't decided to do this as I thought it looked more obvious that the cloud represented Co2 as it looked hidden otherwise.

Overall I have taken on board the comments but mainly were positive so I just kept in mind what ideas I had and continued with it.